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EdxPriss Children by Bitter-Cherry EdxPriss Children by Bitter-Cherry
Finished~

Gosh, working on these kids has been a pain in the ass. Miss Diva in particular was the worst.

A fifth kid was added because of reasons. He's cute. ♥

I think they're well balanced ... it bugs me a little that I think there might be a pattern with their genetic but oh well. I was going to explain each kid but I think you guys can make the comparisons and see what they got from each parent~

These designs are final, I'll probably post reference sheets for each some other time, and I should do the same with Mark and Winry's family ♥

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I really like how you did this. How you wrote their names, nicknames and years. You also really mixed up the traits for the kids, not having any one child look too much like just one of the parents.
The Shadows adds a nice contrast from the characters and the background.
I also love how well you did the details. The twins' hairstyles are very much alike but you can see differences, like there should e.
Anthony also has a little pacifier near him and his bear, something that I would personally overlook if I were to create something like this.
Emily and Eddy seem to be very close in hairstyles, and it's a unique, how they both have 'dad's' stray hair, though the color is slightly different.
I love that Eddy is the only one with 'mom's' beauty mark. I also just thought of this, is it possible the twins have pony tails like their dad?
Overall it's an amazing artwork, I think. Very Detailed, but not too much, ya know?
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Magnífico dibujo que ya tenía ganas de comentar.
Parece que el plato fuerte de este trabajo es la aparición de un quinto niño. Fue toda una sorpresa ya que pensé que las gemelas serían las últimas (te lo tenías bien guardado, ¿eh? XD), pero sin duda alguna ha sido una buena aportación a la familia. Tiene un curioso diseño ya que es como ver a un Ed pelirrojo y de ojos azules. En mi opinión, de los dos hermanos varones, él es el que más se parece a su padre, aún si no tiene una paleta de colores parecida a la de él.
Eddy, se parece mucho más a su madre, pero aún así sigues reconociendo la imagen de Ed en él. Y algo parecido pasa con Emily, que a pesar de todo se parece mucho a Priss gracias a que tiene el pelo muy parecido a ella. A veces creo que Priss luciría muy parecida a ella si se tiñera los cabellos de rubio.
En las gemelas, no obstante es donde veo menos equilibrio de parecidos, ya que prácticamente no tienen nada de Ed, tan sólo los ojos dorados (cosa que no se apreciaría si se viera en un comic en blanco y negro) y el pelo alisado, pero Priss tampoco lo tiene muy ondulado así que no se ve mucha diferencia, además que el flequillo de ellas sigue recordando al de su madre aún cuando supuestamente el pelo liso les viene de su padre. Prácticamente verlas a ellas es como ver a Priss con lentillas doradas. Yo les hubiera aclarado un poquitín el pelo de la misma manera que se lo oscureciste a Eddy o modificarles ligeramente el flequillo para que se note que los genes paternos están más presentes en ellas.
En cuanto a diseño, es en ellas donde veo menos originalidad ya que se acercan peligrosamente a ser niñas clones. En el resto de hijos no hay prácticamente nada que criticar en contra.
En cuanto a los padres, pues decir que están fabulosos. Ed parece un padre orgulloso y en cuanto a Priss creo que no puede faltar el comentario sobre su busto. Parece que ahora usa la copa E de sujetador, aunque no sería de extrañar después de haber dado a luz a cinco hijos.
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fmafan101 Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Are u planning on doing one of these with mark and winryMeow :3 
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Bitter-Cherry Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2014  Student Digital Artist
Yeh!
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fmafan101 Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
awesome!!Clap 
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MightyRock Featured By Owner May 24, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I love the way the red hair contrasts with the golden eyes.
Whenever I see OC pairings that have children, I often wonder why they don't go as far back as like the grandparents traits.

It's completely obvious that Hohenheim's genes were dominant, but it'd just be nice to see like a splash of chestnut hair or emerald green eyes in a future child.

Damn science.

I still like this. It's absolutely adorable, your pairing is cayoooot~
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Bitter-Cherry Featured By Owner May 24, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Thanks! I do too actually. :3

Ah well yes, his genes are dominant. I've always taken Xerxenian characters as similar to Ishvalans in that matter, they seem to have very strong genes. The reason you don't see that often though, is probably because it's hard to get away with that and still have the children look enough like their parents, this is particularly a problem with OcxCanon ships because people don't know the OC and its family by default like they would with canons. I did try different pallets for the kids here, but it just wasn't working. Tho, either way, I think Al is more likely to pass on his mother's genes. :3

Genetics were a bitch too XD

Thank :3
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MightyRock Featured By Owner May 24, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
You're welcome!
Xerxenian and Ishvalan genes DEFINITELY are strong, but they're pretty so es okay.~

He does have the shape of his mother's eyes. Such a friendly warmth they give off :3

You're welcome again!
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LoveLiebAmor6 Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2013  Hobbyist
Oh, dear Lord. They all got the antenna.
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AJInu-Okami Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Aw~!
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KateElric Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2012
Trish? like Trisha Elric Ed's Mom... that's SOOO SWEEET!
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KateElric Featured By Owner Oct 26, 2012
i absolutely adore this pic
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