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Finished~

Gosh, working on these kids has been a pain in the ass. Miss Diva in particular was the worst.

A fifth kid was added because of reasons. He's cute. ♥

I think they're well balanced ... it bugs me a little that I think there might be a pattern with their genetic but oh well. I was going to explain each kid but I think you guys can make the comparisons and see what they got from each parent~

These designs are final, I'll probably post reference sheets for each some other time, and I should do the same with Mark and Winry's family ♥

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I really like how you did this. How you wrote their names, nicknames and years. You also really mixed up the traits for the kids, not having any one child look too much like just one of the parents.
The Shadows adds a nice contrast from the characters and the background.
I also love how well you did the details. The twins' hairstyles are very much alike but you can see differences, like there should e.
Anthony also has a little pacifier near him and his bear, something that I would personally overlook if I were to create something like this.
Emily and Eddy seem to be very close in hairstyles, and it's a unique, how they both have 'dad's' stray hair, though the color is slightly different.
I love that Eddy is the only one with 'mom's' beauty mark. I also just thought of this, is it possible the twins have pony tails like their dad?
Overall it's an amazing artwork, I think. Very Detailed, but not too much, ya know?
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Magnífico dibujo que ya tenía ganas de comentar.
Parece que el plato fuerte de este trabajo es la aparición de un quinto niño. Fue toda una sorpresa ya que pensé que las gemelas serían las últimas (te lo tenías bien guardado, ¿eh? XD), pero sin duda alguna ha sido una buena aportación a la familia. Tiene un curioso diseño ya que es como ver a un Ed pelirrojo y de ojos azules. En mi opinión, de los dos hermanos varones, él es el que más se parece a su padre, aún si no tiene una paleta de colores parecida a la de él.
Eddy, se parece mucho más a su madre, pero aún así sigues reconociendo la imagen de Ed en él. Y algo parecido pasa con Emily, que a pesar de todo se parece mucho a Priss gracias a que tiene el pelo muy parecido a ella. A veces creo que Priss luciría muy parecida a ella si se tiñera los cabellos de rubio.
En las gemelas, no obstante es donde veo menos equilibrio de parecidos, ya que prácticamente no tienen nada de Ed, tan sólo los ojos dorados (cosa que no se apreciaría si se viera en un comic en blanco y negro) y el pelo alisado, pero Priss tampoco lo tiene muy ondulado así que no se ve mucha diferencia, además que el flequillo de ellas sigue recordando al de su madre aún cuando supuestamente el pelo liso les viene de su padre. Prácticamente verlas a ellas es como ver a Priss con lentillas doradas. Yo les hubiera aclarado un poquitín el pelo de la misma manera que se lo oscureciste a Eddy o modificarles ligeramente el flequillo para que se note que los genes paternos están más presentes en ellas.
En cuanto a diseño, es en ellas donde veo menos originalidad ya que se acercan peligrosamente a ser niñas clones. En el resto de hijos no hay prácticamente nada que criticar en contra.
En cuanto a los padres, pues decir que están fabulosos. Ed parece un padre orgulloso y en cuanto a Priss creo que no puede faltar el comentario sobre su busto. Parece que ahora usa la copa E de sujetador, aunque no sería de extrañar después de haber dado a luz a cinco hijos.
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fmafan101 Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Are u planning on doing one of these with mark and winryMeow :3 
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Bitter-Cherry Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2014  Student Digital Artist
Yeh!
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fmafan101 Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
awesome!!Clap 
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filiafairy Featured By Owner May 24, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I love the way the red hair contrasts with the golden eyes.
Whenever I see OC pairings that have children, I often wonder why they don't go as far back as like the grandparents traits.

It's completely obvious that Hohenheim's genes were dominant, but it'd just be nice to see like a splash of chestnut hair or emerald green eyes in a future child.

Damn science.

I still like this. It's absolutely adorable, your pairing is cayoooot~
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Bitter-Cherry Featured By Owner May 24, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Thanks! I do too actually. :3

Ah well yes, his genes are dominant. I've always taken Xerxenian characters as similar to Ishvalans in that matter, they seem to have very strong genes. The reason you don't see that often though, is probably because it's hard to get away with that and still have the children look enough like their parents, this is particularly a problem with OcxCanon ships because people don't know the OC and its family by default like they would with canons. I did try different pallets for the kids here, but it just wasn't working. Tho, either way, I think Al is more likely to pass on his mother's genes. :3

Genetics were a bitch too XD

Thank :3
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filiafairy Featured By Owner May 24, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
You're welcome!
Xerxenian and Ishvalan genes DEFINITELY are strong, but they're pretty so es okay.~

He does have the shape of his mother's eyes. Such a friendly warmth they give off :3

You're welcome again!
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LoveLiebAmor6 Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2013  Hobbyist
Oh, dear Lord. They all got the antenna.
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AJInu-Okami Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Aw~!
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KateElric Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2012
Trish? like Trisha Elric Ed's Mom... that's SOOO SWEEET!
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KateElric Featured By Owner Oct 26, 2012
i absolutely adore this pic
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salina-mathews Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2012  Student Digital Artist
With that many nice kids I wonder if their house looks like this: [link]
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231smarty Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
What a cute family! ^_^
Trish and Angie remind me of Ami and Mami Futami from Idolm@sters!
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spiralmaestro Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2012
awesome job!
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trossidevil Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
awww the whole family so cute... damn did mum and dad get busy.
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fireandwaterqueen Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2012  Student General Artist
aww they are too cute..I;d have to say that Eddy and Anthony are my favorite
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Koichi-Chan Featured By Owner May 8, 2012
What I like so much about EdPriss is, how natural their relationship is. The same for EdJen. I think that you and :iconcookiemotel94: created very unique and nice characters with another personality like Ed's. I'm just sick of many OCs who are just genderbended Eds and selfinserts.
But now for the picture ^^
The children have all something of both parents, that's great. They also seems to be very unique characters ^^ The colouration is also beautiful as always *.*
P.S. Please let me give a hug to Anthony, he's so adowable :3
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Z0MGedELR1C Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
was it tough raising them? :D MUST KNOW!!!!! *has a pen and paper ready for notes and an autograph*
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WhiteFlowerKanga Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I really like this! But, whenever I envisioned Ed having kids I thought he would name his first daughter Trisha after his mother. I really like how you drew Eddy very handsome. Emily is lovely, she looks like such a pretty girl, and such a drama queen. The twins are so cute, they take after their mother a lot. Baby Anthony is so~ adorable. And of course Edward and Priscilla, love it! In my opinion Priscilla is better for Ed because with Winry it just seemed wrong. Like incest or something. Don't get me wrong I love a good EdxWin fanfiction just as much as the next girl but if you think about it..... *shudder*. I just love your OC and I hope I can get a Tablet soon so I can start on my own. Also, I love the whole WinxMark thing! He seems Perfect for her! keep doing what you do! :3
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ReignofDarkRose Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I just noticed that the mother's traits are much stronger than the father's.
adorable children though! ^w^ ~<3
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Crazy-Anime-Luver Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2012  Student General Artist
They're so adorable!
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Tigrette-of-Fire Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Amazing! Gah- they're so cute! (Psh, I totally don't have a crush on Eddy... *shifty eyes*)

Just curious, are you going to show us what Trish, Angie, and Anthony look like when they're older? It's totally fine if not, but I'm just wondering. :)
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xMystery21x Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
awww very cute :3
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YunaKasune Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
-Rewind- *At computer* Okay! Time to check up Priscy's work!~ |3 *Picture pops up**spots Emily* oHo .... *Rolls chair back**looks in mirror* oHo.... *determined face* If I grow my hair longer I shall look like her! That shall be my new goal! *spins on chair laughing like an idiot*
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YunaKasune Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh. An Eddy's just as cute as ever~ :iconimhappyplz:
I absolutely love his curly hair~, I could just spend hours playing with it~
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D-Thessy Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2012
Veo que le has cambiado el pelo a Eddy, ahora tiene otro tono de rojizo, me recuerda al color de Julia no sé por qué. ¿Al final le has hecho los ojos azules a Emily? ¿Y eso? :3 ¿A qué se debe el cambio?
No sé como hacen Ed y Priss para no confundir a las Mellizas ¿será porque cada una se ponen en un lado concreto a la hora de abrazar peluches? :giggle:
¡y has hecho otro bebe! XDDD Ahora si que es oficial: Priss es un conejo XDDD
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Bitter-Cherry Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Enrealidad no es tan diferente del original, quiza mas brillante. Es el tono que se llama "strawberry blonde" aun no entra en rojo. o3o/ ... pero si Emily ya los tenia azules en las primeras refs y pics que subi... y bueno porque le iba a meter un tono claro de dorado pero Nova y yo no nos poniamos de acuerdo.

XDDD Dicen que las madres siempre saben distinguir a sus gemelos, y bueno eso si que llevan el flequito de lados opuestos ademas del color de la ropa.
LOL Verdad? XD
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SilentTomorrowx Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Awww they're all so darn cute!!!!! :love:
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Peace64 Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
Oh...my...gawd...They're all so cute =w= !!! And I just thought of an idea... Prissy and Ed plus 5 :XD: I would be way better than Jon and Kate plus 8 :la: !
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Deus-Lux Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Cute, well done.
Anthony does look a bit like Gaara from Naruto, colour-wise. *shot*
They look so cute! :3
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Xxhot-panda-luvxX Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2012
It does look like you did work hard on the kids. It was well worth it, they all look great :D
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tansyuduri Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2012  Student Writer
I really like some of the designs I like emily's especily it looks very original

Hmmmm I'd throw in a few more traits not seen in ed or Priscilla and maybe go with a different name for Eddy

But it looks good overall.

Oh wait... your not in my group anymore I'm not supposed to critique right?
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Bitter-Cherry Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Adding traits not seen in them will result in the kids not looking like they are theirs. Some of the girls tried this and it didn't go well. The thing with designing fanchildren is that you have to stick to the looks of their parents but still make them look different, which is the difficult part.

I'm sticking to his name, I know a good deal of Ed's fankids are named after him so it's overdone, but I like it, and I could see it happening in the canon... also, going by Eddy will never be as bad as going by Ed Jr.

"Oh wait... your not in my group anymore I'm not supposed to critique right?"

What is that at the end supposed to mean if you post this anyways? It just sounds incredibly stupid...
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tansyuduri Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2012  Student Writer
I dont think it would nessasarily do that Ed and Alphonse still look like they belong to their parents
ok

It means I am asking in an indirect way if i am aloud to critique you
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Bitter-Cherry Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Ed and Al are only get traits from them, especially with their original color palettes and in the first series Al's color palette is only darkened due to Trisha's genes, like with Eddy's hair here. In the manga they both have the same shade of golden hair and eyes. Ed gets his looks right from Hoho and Al gets more traits from Trisha, like his eyes. Even if they had unique traits, they're canon characters, and people will not question this, they just know who their parents are, it's different with fanchildren because people don't know these characters, so who their parents are has to show.

It sounds rather sarcastic, even aggressive, I wouldn't word things like that.... and what stops you? Although there's really no info on these kids here yet. These are just the final designs.
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tansyuduri Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2012  Student Writer
yes but they don't look substantially like either of the parents. hair is very diferant for one not just in color. but its just an example. its your chice do do what you want. I just thinking throwing a few more things to differentiate the twins or eye colors might be interesting.

I didn't mean to sound like that sorry and ok
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Bitter-Cherry Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Ed's identical to young Hoho... and you're talking about hairstyles... and even with these Ed and Al still get similar hair, if Trisha had short hair it would look similar to Al's.... which isn't exactly a good thing, but yeah just explaining that.

I've even played around with hair textures with these kids. Eddy's hair is a strawberry blonde color and it's wavy like his mother's but it has his father's texture.

Emily has her mother's texture but her dad's color, her eyes are a mix of both and they're blue like her mother's.

The twins have straight hair like Ed's but with more volume like Priss's, their mom's hair color and eye shape and dad's eye color.

Tony has Ed's eye shape but blue eyes and straight hair like Ed's but red, not exactly his mother's shade, it's lighter but yeah.

Differentiate the twins? They're identical twins not fraternal twins, they're supposed to be identical, the way to tell who is who is with their bangs and the colors they wear. They get different hairstyles when they get to their teens though, but little twins are usually like this.

I get what you mean with the mixing, and many things were considered, the kids have been extremely hard to design, I've been working on this for a year. We tried golden eyes on Emily, but we wanted a different shade, it just didn't work, in the end these were the designs we picked, and there's a reason for everything.
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tansyuduri Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2012  Student Writer
I like eddy;s design and emilysa a lot'

Mabye you could give the twins a different bang style?

I meant to differentiate from their parents not each other


Emily's eyes are very nice in blue.
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Bitter-Cherry Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2012  Student Digital Artist
... but they have the most original/different bangs along with Tony... Emily's bangs are similar to her mom's and Eddy's to his dad's.

It's probably the nice blue-golden contrast. It bugs me when people ask if she's Winry's even if Winry's eyes are way darker tho.
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NaokoElric2250 Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Five is alot :). But you did day they wanted a big family. However, at least it is not something crasy, like seven or in one real life case, FOURTEEN.
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Bitter-Cherry Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2012  Student Digital Artist
XD I know, but Ed is said to have a big family in Chronicles, so even if he's with Priss and not Winry here, Priss loves children, so I thought a big family made sense in this case too.

XDDD Big family can mean lots of things yes.
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NaokoElric2250 Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
"Chronicles"? Even so, I did figure that.

Yeah, more than anything a whole of giving birth and screaming (from both parents and children).

Funny avatar, BTW.
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Bitter-Cherry Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Yeah that guide.

So much chaos lol.

Why thank you. :iconlikeasirplz:
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NaokoElric2250 Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Oooh.

Yeah, my aunt Dionne had enough trouble when all four of hers had to be looked after, and on her own. Driving was worse. I mean, who wouldn't have borderline raod rage if you had four hyper blood children plus two non-blood cousins (my borther and me) and a rottweiler that will not sit still in the back of a 4 x 4?
Oh, that reminds me, do they have any pets? And I must say, the curly haired boy is my favourite :).
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xxminixkittyxx Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2012
At least we know now who Ed married in the real world!
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Bitter-Cherry Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2012  Student Digital Artist
This isn't official, they're all my fan character, for a story a share with 2 of my friends. Winry's with other guy too, there are some pictures of him in my gallery, his name is Mark.

And I didn't mean to scare you with my other replies, I was very impulsive when I first thought you were flaming.
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trezilla Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2012  Student General Artist
I took a very quick look at this and I thought Eddy was playing with Emily's hair. X3
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Supahfrog Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2012
These are adorable! Very creative and incredibly cute :D
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TruSay Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2012
Aww so cute :# Also, it may just be me but....Pricy's breasts just seem a bit too big....and i know your character already has big breasts to begin with and i cant see the rest of her body for comparison...and maybe her breats are bigger because of child birth....oh i'll shut up XD Great pic :)
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Bitter-Cherry Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2012  Student Digital Artist
It's both that they are bigger here and because of the clothes she's wearing as well as how her arm is posing, and yes they are bigger because of her pregnancies, and because women's breasts usually grow as they age. Especially when they're around their 35-40s because there's a lot of hormonal stuff going on, women undergo major hormonal changes every 7 years more or less.
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LillMaroon-Marx Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2012
too cute~

lol got a crush on Eddy now :meow:

OMG and little Anthony I just wanna hug! :meow: You're so good at drawing!
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